3 Things I know I want to revise...
1. My video -- eeek!! How annoying am I?! First of all, that little noise I make is terrible. Second, what was I thinking talking for almost 6 minutes thinking people actually sat there and were listening to my horrible speech about the twitterive that they were about to read anyway. I need to make it shorter.
2. Add in a genre about the baby being born -- I was thinking maybe another journal entry with the lyrics to Peal Jam's Breathe? What does everyone think about that? I love the song and when it came on in my car today I was like 'wait, perfect for someone going into labor too!'
3. I already revised the things that were said in class -- took out the website and made the closing be the video. Hmm..I wish I could add faint background music throughout the whole thing. Like a movie.